This is an incredibly compelling setup—grief, buried resentment, a power shift, and a woman reclaiming her voice. If you’d like, I can help you:

• Continue the story with the moment Jenelle confronts Elizabeth or makes her power move.
• Polish or edit the writing to tighten the prose or enhance certain emotional beats.
• Structure it into chapters or parts if you’re building a longer piece.
• Or even rewrite it in a specific tone or format (like a short story, screenplay, or journal entry).

What direction are you thinking of taking this next?